Ok. I wrote another poem. But it's a bit different to what I usually write- this is what they call an abstract poem. This is my first go at this kind of thing, so I'm not sure how it turned out... And for the record- the dodgy spacing and lack of capitals/punctuation is meant to be there. So, tell me what you think. Did it work? Did it not? Should I never try abstract poetry again? Generic thoughts? You know. The usual.
Oh- and another thing. I'm sorry if it's not very accurate... I don't have much experience, so I was just trying to make it up. I'm not sure how that went. Yeah.
Anyway... I present to you...
she took a sip
eventually the whole bottle was gone
there was too much hurt to
she wanted anything that would make her forget
she wanted to
she wanted to be
she didn’t want to care about the
but that seemed all she could do
care about the
‘give me another’
and the cold glass was placed in front of her
the intoxicating fluid
it wasn’t over