Monday, 21 November 2011

The Trial of the Thief in Black

"We've gathered here today," he said
"To hopefully chop off the head
"Of one so daringly conceited
"She seems so nice, but don't be cheated!

"Thief in Black, she calls herself,
"And fights 'for greater good'
"A jar of hearts stands on her shelf
"All she says is falsehood!"

The man who spoke stood fat and tall,
He faced the crowd, spoke lies to all
In order to convince them that
Beloved Kal was just a prat

The throng believed his every word
They jeered and 'boo'ed so loud
A bemused chuckle wasn't heard
From the lady in the crowd

A grandiose poster was unfolded
The Thief's shy smile was then beholded
By every person in the crowd
Who held chins high and solemnly vowed

"THE THIEF IN BLACK WILL SEE HER END
"WITHOUT A HOPE, A CARE, A FRIEND
"SHE WILL BE FOUND,
"AND LOSE HER HEAD!!"

Then suddenly, a blinding light
Made all the people freeze with fright
A group of people, standing tall
A man in purple adressed all:

"To say the Thief will die alone
"Is only your ignorance shown
"'Cause as you see, she has her share
"Of people who always love and care."

The lady who had laughed before
Laughed once again and her friends saw
The lovely lady in the crowd
Why, it was Kal, and off she bound

She joined her friends and hugged her love
Rain started pouring from above
They dissappeared in clouds of smoke
The crowd was left outside to choke

They landed in a grassy plain
The sun was shining down again
Over the big group of friends
To Kal, right then, they seemed godsends.

7 comments:

  1. *hugs Red* I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! :D THANK YOU RED!!!!
    This is EPICA! You are so talented! I am honored you thought to write this! *bows then applauds*
    well done Red!
    Thanks for posting this and sharing this with me.
    *hugs her some more

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  2. *accepts all hugs and hugs back ever MOAR*

    I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT! I enjoyed writing it, and I imagined the man that spoke in the beginning as a 'Worm' from the Pink Floyd movie, The Wall.

    The drawing, also, kept me from falling asleep in a particulary boring maths lesson! So it was, litteraly, MY PLEASURE writing this!

    I love the Thief in Black so much! The most AWESOMESAUCE character I've ever known!

    *hugshugshugshugshugshugshugshugshugshugshugs*

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  3. LOLRed! You aound like me when I'm in class supposed to be paying attention! Except I can't do art. I sorta doodle! LOL

    *hugs Red some more for just being so EPICA*

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  4. I doodle most of the time too, it's rare that I actually DRAW. But luckily, this time I did ^^

    *hugs foreverandever!*

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  5. Red, you are seriously talented, this. Is. EPICA!

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  6. this is so good!


    but do you really think any of us would stand aside and let her be put on trial!! =P

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  7. Thanks Chan! Gosh, I love compliments! *blushes*

    Ven, thanks! No, I don't really. But then again, the people are so dumb, I doubt they even realized Kal was there until she ran off with them ^^

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