Monday, 11 June 2012

Trust in love-foolish hope

I put my trust in love, I dared to hope,
But now I know, my heart is dashed,
Break apart on despair, allow myself to drift,
As I am washed around the edges of the pit,
Broken sorrows and jagged truth,
Love is cruel and hope is pain,
Drowning in the loveless rain.


  1. *hugs Chan*
    I miss you so much. It's wonderful to read something by you again, even if it is so sad.
    *hugs again*
    I am sorry you have been hurt. You are such a wonderful person. I hope things get better for you soon. I love seeing you happy.

  2. *hugs*
    This is a beautiful poem, Chan. But so sad...
    For me, love is amazing. Not just romantic love, but also friendly love and family love. Don't let the rain drown you - dance in it! It seems impossible to have hope when it seems that every hope and wish you ever had has gone to waste, but there'll come a time when they won't waste away, when it'll be worth it. I hope that time comes as soon as possible! :)