The sun rose in purples and pinks;
The sky seemed to laugh a joyful laugh.
The clouds bespeckled the heavens in winks!
That's how the sun rose.
The beach upon which I sat
Was painted in orange and yellow.
The sun took a gander wearing her peacock hat!
That's how the sun rose.
The roaring ocean lit up with fire
Happily absorbing her sun's morning rays!
And the sun-looking down with a smile- turned the world to a burning blaze.
The sun set in blazes of red;
ReplyDeleteThe sky sighed in dark blue tiredness.
The clouds seemed like sheep you count before bed;
That's how the sun set.
The roof upon which I sat
Became a dark black-white indigo.
The moon shined and painted the scenery softly;
That's how night fell.
And with Night I fell to the hands of Dreams
My eyes closed yet my mind was delighted!
And the moon - gazing down at my dreams - saw a smile on my tired face.
Well, that was fun!
SKYRIL, WILL YOU EVER CEASE TO AMAZE ME WITH YOUR POETIC LOVELYNESS?
Every single poem of yours I have had the pleasure to read has touched me in a certain way. This one, because I've been counting days for a while now. Sun rises, sun sets, and days go by, bringing me closer to when I'll be the happiest I've been in a while ^^
*huggies Skyril* You're amazing, you are!
Ooh, Red, that was amazing! I LOVE your poem! You should post it so more people will read it! :D
ReplyDeleteAnd I have to say THANK YOU! So much! You're comments always encourage me to write more :D
~huggies back~